如何写关于海洋动物的正反对比类议论文
写作任务
你校英语社团将举办一场英语辩论赛,要求参赛者以“Should we forbid using marine animals for entertainment?”为题进行辩论。请根据下面的提示写一篇辩论稿,内容包括:
1. 表明你的观点;
2. 给出几条理由。
注意:1. 词数100左右(标题已给出,但不计入总词数);2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Should we forbid using marine animals for entertainment?
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写作指导
一、审题分析
本写作任务要求针对话题“Should we forbid using marine animals for entertainment?”写一篇辩论稿表明自己的观点,属于议论文。议论文要求论点明确,论据充分,说服力强。
二、谋篇布局
本写作可分为三部分
第一部分:表明个人观点(支持或反对);
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第二部分:陈述理由(论据充分,有说服力);
好人说第三部分:总结(重申自己的观点)。
三、组织语言
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★表达个人观点
Personally speaking, ...
In my opinion, ...
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From my point of view ...
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My personal view is that ...
I think / don't think ...
I think whether ... or not depends on ...
I personally feel that ...
I firmly believe that ...
I firmly support the view that ...
I partly / fully agree that ...
I agree to / am in favour of / against ...
★过渡性词汇或表达
·两个论据:For one thing, ... for another ...; On the one hand, ..., on the other hand, ... ·三个论据:Firstly / First / First of all ... Secondly / Second ... Lastly / Last but not least ... ·信息递进:besides, in addition, moreover, furthermore, what's more / worse
·信息转折:in spite of, however, whereas, on the contrary
·结论:all in all, in conclusion, in a word, in a nutshell, in short, in brief, on balance, to sum up, to conclude
★与听众互动
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Have you ever ...?
How would you feel if ...?
Did you know that ...?
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【范文展示】
Possible version one:(正方观点)
Should we forbid using marine animals for entertainment?
I firmly support the view that we should forbid using marine animals for entertainment. My reasons are as follows.
First, marine animals have the right to live in the sea instead of aquariums, where they are living a lonely life because they are separated from their companions. Second, they are badly treated when they are trained to perform some tough tasks. Worse still, they might get injured when they are performing for human beings for long hours. When they are sick or too old to perform, they may be killed by the owners.
In short, marine animals are an essential part of our ecosystem. So they should be left in the sea. That is why we should forbid using marine animals for entertainment. Possible version two:(反方观点)
过火伴奏Should we forbid using marine animals for entertainment?
I think we should not forbid using marine animals for entertainment because of the following reasons.
First of all, just like the zoo, the aquarium provides a place where children have fun with their family during the holidays. Besides, children can learn more about marine animals by watching them performing amazing tasks. Last but not least, the money collected from marine animals' performances can be used for research on them.
Although marine animals suffer a lot when they are transported from the sea to the aquarium and they might be badly treated when they are trained, their performances have long been a part of our life and they can inspire children to care more about them.