When I was 13, I climbed my first mountaina 3,900foot peak (山峰) near where I live in Surrey, British Columbia. I was overweight at the time and out of breath when I reached the top. But I loved to challenge something bigger than myself, Soon I'd climbed nearly 100peaks. My parents were happy I'd finally found a hobby.
I often go climbing with my friend Mel Olsen, whom I'd met on the Internet, Two years ago, on 30 December when I was 16, she and I drove to Oregon to climb 11,240foot Mount Hood.
It's safer to start winter climbs at night when there's less danger of the sun melting the snow pack. That day, we started at 3 am, following the path alongside the ski runs. The temperature was about 10 C. Along the way, we met two other climbers, and the four of us continued together.
After about five hours, we reached Devil's Kitchen,a plateau (高原) at about 10,000feet, just before the final push to the top. By this point, the wind conditions were terrible.My skin felt as
though it were burning. The other climbers decided to turn back, but Mel and I went ahead, We checked our equipment and were prepared for the climb.The way we followed grew narrower and steeper (更陡的). At around 9 am, we reached an ice step. It was about three or four feet tall, I volunteered to go first. I placed my left foot on the ice step. It felt good, Confidently, I thought I was safe, I put my full weight on it.Suddenly, I heard a crack (爆烈声),and a whole piece of ice broke off the step, right under my foot.
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In a while, I started to fall.
I'd been lying on the ice for four hours by the time the rescuers reached me.
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In a while, I started to fall. My left foot had lost its support, and I tumbled backwards. Mel
grabbed my jacket and managed to slow me down, but I still fell about 50 feet down the mountain. I was lucky to be alive, but I was badly injured. My left leg was broken in multiple places, and I had a deep gash on my forehead. Mel called for help on her satellite phone, and the rescue team arrived in a helicopter.
I'd been lying on the ice for four hours by the time the rescuers reached me. I was freezing cold, but I was grateful to see them. They carefully put me on a stretcher and loaded me into the helicopter. I was taken to a hospital in Portland, where I was treated for my injuries. Despite the accident, I still love climbing. It's a challenge that pushes me to be my best. I've learned a lot from my experiences, and I'm determined to continue climbing, but I'm also more careful now. I always make sure to check the conditions and take the necessary precautions before heading out on a climb.
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In a while, I started to fall. My heart pounded in my chest as I reached for the ice axe, but my fingers couldn't grip it. I couldn't feel anything below my waist, but I knew I was in deep t
rouble. I looked up at Mel and saw the fear in her eyes. She was holding onto the ice axe with all her might, but it was no use. The ice step was giving way beneath us.
i started a jokeI'd been lying on the ice for four hours by the time the rescuers reached me. My whole body was numb, and I could barely move. I looked up at Mel and saw the relief in her eyes. She had managed to cling to the ice axe, but she was exhausted and covered in bruises. The rescuers quickly secured us both with ropes and carefully lifted us off the mountain.
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In a while, I started to fall. My left leg was still caught in the ice, and I was hanging upside down. I was confused and scared, but I remembered my training. I stayed calm, and I used my ice ax and crampons to slow my fall. I stopped about 20 feet below the ice step.
I'd been lying on the ice for four hours by the time the rescuers reached me. My body was numb from the cold, and I couldn't feel my left leg. The rescuers put me on a stretcher
and carried me down the mountain. I was grateful for their help. Despite the accident, I still love climbing. It's a great way to challenge myself and experience the beauty of nature. I've learned a lot from my experiences, and I'm grateful for the support of my friends and family. I'll continue to climb, but I'll always be careful and follow safety guidelines.
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In a while, I started to fall. Fortunately, I was able to grab onto a rock with my right hand and hold on for dear life. I was suspended in midair, hanging on to the rock for dear life. Mel quickly realized what had happened and rushed over to help me. She carefully placed her ax in the ice below me and used it to help me back onto the trail.
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